Struggling to write a scholarship essay? Let’s make it easy AF.
Here’s everything you need to know to score $28,000 by writing scholarship applications for the Terry Fox Humanitarian Award.
- Scholarship Value: $28,000
- Application Deadline: February 1st
- Who Can Apply: Students graduating high school, finished high school, or completing their first year of CÉGEP
- Where To Apply: Terry Fox Humanitarian Award Website
If you’re anything shy of a natural word wizard, essay writing can be a daunting experience.
The thought of hovering over your keyboard for hours, surveilling that blinky-cursor-thing while it pulsates your word doc over, and over, and over again, can force your body’s cortisol levels through the roof! Yikes.
How can you, a gentle honors student, be considered for a high profile scholarship if you fail to showcase your Robert Greene potential in 750 words?! Ugh.
Consider this article your 101 crash course to crush your scholarship application, particularly the essay portion. Let’s use the Terry Fox Humanitarian Award as an example.
The first thing you’ll need to know is that the application is divided into four primary categories:
- References (contacts of people that can speak to your character and humanitarian volunteer experience).
- Personal information (Basic Information, Emergency Contact, Education, Work Experience, Athletic, Volunteer, Other Extracurricular Activities, Awards and Recognition).
- Essay (750 words to summarize your entire existence, fml).
- Supporting documentation (transcripts).
The good news? Submitting your reference, personal and supporting information is pretty much idiot-proof. So, you’re safe there.
The bad-ish news? The personal essay asks you to cover a lot of information, which means you’ll have to elevator pitch yourself in a maximum of 750 words *cue the panic*.
So, let’s focus on the essay stuff.
Firstly, have you ever seen Gary Provost’s five-word thing where he talks about the perils of mundane writing?
Okay, stop begging. I’ll show you.
In his work, “Make Every Word Count,” Provost offers some useful writing advice. The key to making yourself stand-out is to catch your reader’s attention, immediately. Additionally, some people say that with attention spans decreasing in today’s digital climate, marketers only have 8.5 seconds (or less) to make an impression. So, it’s best to start every introduction with a short (but punchy) sentence. From there, you’ll want to switch it up between short and long sentences to add variety and keep the writing dynamic.
Literally no one:
Me: It’s called the kickboxing technique!!
In the case of the Terry Fox Humanitarian Award essay, maybe it looks something like: “I lost my father to cancer when I was 13 years old.” or “I was 13 years old when I saved a man’s life.”
Would you keep reading? I would.
When they say “background,” they don’t mean your place of birth or native language. The program administrators will want to know who you are in a general sense, including your accomplishments, your motives, and perhaps the steps you’re taking to reach certain objectives.
RULE OF THUMB: In the words of legend Gord Downie (may he rest easy) “Nobody’s interested in something you didn’t do.”
Basically, talk is cheap. Demonstrate your commitment and embodiment of Terry’s humanitarian or athletic ideals by explaining the implications of what you’ve done, instead of what you’re going to do. Writing scholarship applications doesn’t have to be too difficult.
This could be anything, really. Whether you’ve faced mental health struggles, physical barriers, or learning disabilities throughout your youth — this is your opportunity to talk about how they’ve turned into a drive to explore healthy outlets and solutions.
In some cases, obstacles may not necessarily be personal. Maybe you’ve outlined specific humanitarian or social welfare objectives but have found the accessibility to information or resources. In this case, you can talk about the social or political implications of not having access to legitimate, public information (such as hindering public activism initiatives, for example). Ideally, you could also speak about your response to such barriers and what you’ve done to try and combat them.
Moreover, the easiest way to tackle this would be to clearly outline what humanitarianism means or looks like to you, how you developed your definition, and how your actions relate. In this section, you can clearly outline the five W’s with respect to how you help others. Basically, if possible, this would be a great place to toss in some hard numbers or measurements that clearly indicate the impact your efforts have made in a community.
Where the heck are you? How did you get there? Where are you going?
This is your final Hail Mary to prove your Terryness. You can talk about your educational plan and where you plan to take it in terms of a career. What impact will your humanitarian service have on your studies? Or, better yet, what impact will your studies have on your humanitarian service?
Get creative and think long term as you’re writing scholarship applications, you’ll do just fine. For more tips, read “The Ultimate Guide To Winning A Terry Fox Humanitarian Award.”
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